Definitely digging the tune. I liked how it was very slow and then BOOM, exploded into the breakcore aspect. Can't give much feedback outside of compliments seeing as I don't know much about music or making it, though.

Good job.

I felt like it needed more variation, and that the variation that did exist came later than it should have. I also think that you maybe could have expanded on the melody a little to add flavour. The percussion however was spot on, but the underlying melody could have been more absorbing with more tonal or melodic variations, possibly other synth like rave leads or other techno-related synth instrumentation. If I was bigger into techno I could likely tell you more.

Thanks for the involvement and the advices, it's probably not the final version so I can fix it :)

Potential.

Mix and change the melody/tune more, introduce the drumloops earlier. It doesn't matter if the song is short, breakcore doesn't normally last more than 2 minutes and stay good anyway.

I was dissapointed in hearing the underground FC world. I was hoping to hear the happier song of the area you posted in the picture. I came expecting that but still, good job on what you've made.