hey there /yn/, i'm currently thinking of writing a yume nikki fan manga because i think it would be interesting. the idea i'm currently pondering over is whether or not to have speech. i think without speech it could be interesting and would really suit the game, but i'm worried it might be boring... anyone care to give me opinions/ideas? i would appreciate it ^^also, pic related, an idea i did for a cover.
hey there /yn/, i'm currently thinking of writing a yume nikki fan manga because i think it would be interesting. the idea i'm currently pondering over is whether or not to have speech. i think without speech it could be interesting and would really suit the game, but i'm worried it might be boring... anyone care to give me opinions/ideas? i would appreciate it ^^
also, pic related, an idea i did for a cover.
well, if you must have words, I'd think it'd be best to keep it minimal. Just have facial reactions. Even the slightest bit from Madotsuki would sell it.
my advice?get someone experienced with drawing to do it for you. Being able to draw complex expressions emotions and dynamic poses is very important if your trying to make a comic with no words. Also, the artist has to be able to draw monsters well so that they look incredibly creeeeeepyyyyyyou dont have to make everything silent all the time, but keep speech minimal
my advice?get someone experienced with drawing to do it for you. Being able to draw complex expressions emotions and dynamic poses is very important if your trying to make a comic with no words. Also, the artist has to be able to draw monsters well so that they look incredibly creeeeeepyyyyy
you dont have to make everything silent all the time, but keep speech minimal
Add enough speech to keep the readers in line with the story(if it'll have a definitive one). Though try to keep the words to a necessary minimal.Technically speaking, expression and atmosphere will make up most of the "words" you'll use. As they say, a picture's worth a thousand words.I'll be looking forward to you making it. Make sure to try your best~ Last edited 09/04/12(Sun)00:21.
Add enough speech to keep the readers in line with the story(if it'll have a definitive one). Though try to keep the words to a necessary minimal.
Technically speaking, expression and atmosphere will make up most of the "words" you'll use. As they say, a picture's worth a thousand words.
I'll be looking forward to you making it. Make sure to try your best~
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your art is terrible. let someone else do it.
>>243uh huh, good idea :3 thank you.>>245yeah, what i had was just a sketch, not really anything final. the monsters would have to look creepy, or it would just be terrible. i don't think it would be even worth doing if it wasn't creepy. well, i don't know anyone that would want to do it XD thank you for commenting, i appreciate the input ^^>>246yeah, that would be good, just minimal speech. ^^ Thank you, I will :D>>252thank you for taking the time to comment :3 Last edited 09/04/13(Mon)18:49.
>>243
uh huh, good idea :3 thank you.
>>245
yeah, what i had was just a sketch, not really anything final. the monsters would have to look creepy, or it would just be terrible. i don't think it would be even worth doing if it wasn't creepy. well, i don't know anyone that would want to do it XD thank you for commenting, i appreciate the input ^^
>>246
yeah, that would be good, just minimal speech. ^^ Thank you, I will :D
>>252
thank you for taking the time to comment :3
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I like your art, at least you have the time to do backgroundsbut if you want go ahead and find another artist?>>252uguuuuanon-kun hidoi yo
I like your art, at least you have the time to do backgrounds
but if you want go ahead and find another artist?
>>252uguuuuanon-kun hidoi yo
>>255aw, thank you XD i hate not doing backgrounds, white backgrounds irritate me .__. (even though my backgrounds suck, but they're better then having no backgrounds at all XD)i just don't know of any other artists though .__.^^
>>255aw, thank you XD i hate not doing backgrounds, white backgrounds irritate me .__. (even though my backgrounds suck, but they're better then having no backgrounds at all XD)
i just don't know of any other artists though .__.
^^
>>242Read the manga "BLAME!"You can find it all online here: http://www.onemanga.com/BLAME/1/03/It deals with a lot of desolation, and traveling. It's pretty amazing and strange in its own right, but I think it might help you to get an idea of pacing, and working with extremely minimal speech.
>>242Read the manga "BLAME!"You can find it all online here: http://www.onemanga.com/BLAME/1/03/
It deals with a lot of desolation, and traveling. It's pretty amazing and strange in its own right, but I think it might help you to get an idea of pacing, and working with extremely minimal speech.
>>258If you don't find it interesting, at least check out around 11 and on.http://www.onemanga.com/BLAME/10/13/Maybe some later chapters too.
>>256Do like a 12 page one-shot. Map out a short story and draw it.We should have a bunch of people here do one-shots, and see what they all look like, for kicks.Also, Bakuman is a good manga to read, when it comes to figuring out how the manga industry works and good techniques for making comics (especially serials)
>>256Do like a 12 page one-shot. Map out a short story and draw it.We should have a bunch of people here do one-shots, and see what they all look like, for kicks.
Also, Bakuman is a good manga to read, when it comes to figuring out how the manga industry works and good techniques for making comics (especially serials)
>>260I was thinking of doing a short manga with Poniko as the main character, or dreaming girl... it'd pretty much involve her creating a peaceful island in her dreams, but feeling an overwhelming sense of dread, and then "transforming" when Madotsuki comes to kill her.
>>260I fully endorse the one-shot thing. Do we get enough original content peddlers through here to do it? I certainly would. :>
>>252I don't think that was needed .I think that it's a great idea to get a dou for YN. The cover would be nicer in a shorter way; and kyukyu-Kun needs moar color XD
>>252I don't think that was needed .
I think that it's a great idea to get a dou for YN. The cover would be nicer in a shorter way; and kyukyu-Kun needs moar color XD
>>258thank you so much for the suggestion, i'll be sure to check it out ^^>>260that would be awesome XD i mean, if everyone did that, i think it would be really interesting to what style people would do it in/what kind of story would go to it ^^ such a great idea>>>262that is a really creative idea, it's really interesting ^^ you should totally make that, i'd love to see it XD>>263yeah i would too. XD this thread needs moar people willing to do that ^^>>>264aw, thank you XD yeah, that was more just kind of like a sketch idea if i were to do a cover. haha, kyukyu-kun totally does (i think i made him look too cute) XD i had no reference at the time i sketched that, so that's why not everything looks the way it should, i couldn't remember some of it XD
>>258thank you so much for the suggestion, i'll be sure to check it out ^^
>>260that would be awesome XD i mean, if everyone did that, i think it would be really interesting to what style people would do it in/what kind of story would go to it ^^ such a great idea
>>>262
that is a really creative idea, it's really interesting ^^ you should totally make that, i'd love to see it XD
>>263yeah i would too. XD this thread needs moar people willing to do that ^^
>>>264
aw, thank you XD yeah, that was more just kind of like a sketch idea if i were to do a cover. haha, kyukyu-kun totally does (i think i made him look too cute) XD i had no reference at the time i sketched that, so that's why not everything looks the way it should, i couldn't remember some of it XD
>>242Actually I've been having the same idea for a little while, but still have a lot to work on and sort out, like whether or not it should follow events from the game, or some self created as I'm not that experienced with making comics.I too believe in holding speech minimal works best too, that way you have to figure out what the character is thinking for yourself, just like in the game,I do hope to see the comic if you ever make it C:the image to the left is a little quick fake comic page I did over at /o/, made up while drawing Last edited 09/04/28(Tue)14:58.
>>242Actually I've been having the same idea for a little while, but still have a lot to work on and sort out, like whether or not it should follow events from the game, or some self created as I'm not that experienced with making comics.I too believe in holding speech minimal works best too, that way you have to figure out what the character is thinking for yourself, just like in the game,
I do hope to see the comic if you ever make it C:the image to the left is a little quick fake comic page I did over at /o/, made up while drawing
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>>260I'm up for the one-shot thing :D
For a tournament, I'm working on a gag entry with my and my opponent's characters playing along to the Uboa event of Yume Nikki. XD If anyone is interested in seeing it, I can post the finished product here when I'm done. Last edited 09/04/30(Thu)11:19.
For a tournament, I'm working on a gag entry with my and my opponent's characters playing along to the Uboa event of Yume Nikki. XD If anyone is interested in seeing it, I can post the finished product here when I'm done.
Last edited 09/04/30(Thu)11:19.
The file keeps lagging everytime I try to upload it to here so I'll just link it |D.http://www.majhost.com/gallery/izuma/Nevara/gag_entry_copy4.pngIt's what I've been doing so far! Wish me luuuckkk.
The file keeps lagging everytime I try to upload it to here so I'll just link it |D.
http://www.majhost.com/gallery/izuma/Nevara/gag_entry_copy4.png
It's what I've been doing so far! Wish me luuuckkk.
>>352Nice!You better post the finished product here soon.. :D
>>352That. Is. Awesome.
>>352That's so amazing I can't even begin to express how amazing it is.
>>352
That's so amazing I can't even begin to express how amazing it is.
352 poster here! I've finished the lineart and half of the shading's done. I've got background, and text left to do really |D I should be finished (hopefully) within the week.
>>360All of my plans for this week have been postponed.
http://izuma.deviantart.com/art/EFN-Gag-Entry-Yume-Nikki-121457990It's up, it's up! 8D Enjoy it you guys!
http://izuma.deviantart.com/art/EFN-Gag-Entry-Yume-Nikki-121457990
It's up, it's up! 8D Enjoy it you guys!
>>376 Looking Good Izuma!