Bah. I need a tablet >.<First time drawing in Oekaki. :/Critiques please! I need help so I can stop failing so hard. D:EDIT: I made it a bit...thinner in ms paint. I think it helped a little ._. Last edited 10/11/25(Thu)22:53.
Bah. I need a tablet >.<First time drawing in Oekaki. :/Critiques please! I need help so I can stop failing so hard. D:
EDIT: I made it a bit...thinner in ms paint. I think it helped a little ._.
Last edited 10/11/25(Thu)22:53.
>>2039Shes.....a bit derp. But pretty good, i mean, with a mouse
>>2039
Shes.....a bit derp. But pretty good, i mean, with a mouse
http://sketch.odopod.com/flash/OdoSketch.swf?sketchURL=/sketches/250066.xml&userURL=/users/53308&bgURL=/images/bigbg.jpg&mode=embedHeres a masada. I think this is...better... ya...she is kinda derp...i think it might be how wide i drew her face or how far apert her eyes are or something. :I Last edited 10/11/25(Thu)22:46.
http://sketch.odopod.com/flash/OdoSketch.swf?sketchURL=/sketches/250066.xml&userURL=/users/53308&bgURL=/images/bigbg.jpg&mode=embedHeres a masada. I think this is...better... ya...she is kinda derp...i think it might be how wide i drew her face or how far apert her eyes are or something. :I
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>>2042>shewat
>>2042
>she
wat
>>2042Oh... for the last time...MASADA IS A GUY (Or a male robot/alien, or whatever), not a girl!
>>2042Oh... for the last time...
MASADA IS A GUY (Or a male robot/alien, or whatever), not a girl!
>>2058Oh boy, here we go.
>>2058
Oh boy, here we go.
>>2058masada is a sprite in a vague game with no story. just because masada is commonly accepted as male doesnt mean he is officially male. If this person wants to think of masada as a she, then fine, that's their deal.stop being cunts.
>>2061This. Seriously, guys.
>>2039>Critiques please!*Eyes should be roughly one eye-width apart.*I realize you put the nose to the side like that because she's supposed to be looking slightly the other way, but it's still way off-center even for that, I'm afraid. It's also too low on the face.*The mouth is also too low on her face. It's pretty much sitting inside her chin. This is a very common mistake! I have to correct it on my own stuff all the time.*People's craniums are not usually much wider than their faces - her head is looking a little lightbulbish here.Hope this helps!
>Critiques please!
*Eyes should be roughly one eye-width apart.*I realize you put the nose to the side like that because she's supposed to be looking slightly the other way, but it's still way off-center even for that, I'm afraid. It's also too low on the face.*The mouth is also too low on her face. It's pretty much sitting inside her chin. This is a very common mistake! I have to correct it on my own stuff all the time.*People's craniums are not usually much wider than their faces - her head is looking a little lightbulbish here.
Hope this helps!
By she i was talking about the Madosuki picture. I know Seccom is a guy. And thanks for the critique, anon. It helps a lot! >.<